Another one I don't mind.
I recently commented on one of your other pictures and noted the fact that while I'm not really a fan of this style (I refuse to call it "Anime" style, both because that's just an English word in contraction and because while I don't like the style or looks I do like many Japanese animations) your work is actually somewhat decent. Once again my only real gripe with your artwork is the face.
I replaced Oriental Beauty's face with my wife Chie's face, I think I'll replace Claire's face with my Aussie friend Emma's face. Afterall, Emma is very holy. x3 I love the outfit and I love her hair. Long hair is awesome and you picked one of my favourite colours for it.
Also, I'm not factoring this into my actual rating of this piece (That would be unfair) but a more proper spelling of Claire in the Katakana would be "Ku-re-e-a" instead of "Ku-re-ya." Sorry if I'm sounding like a smart-arse, but when I was 7 a cute little girl moved in next door who spoke a strange language and I had to take lessons from her mother in order to speak to the cute little girl who would become my wife as an adult =3